If you were me... that would mean that you had no **. And that would be an odd experience for you, methinks. Anywho... 'twould be very good if put to music. Definitely. Got the angst and the tear-jerking stuff and all.

All right, that's it, you're joining my band... Goodness, you've got everything down... The poetry, the song-writing, the rhyming... ^^

-claps- This was really good, I loved it! =)

I love this song. I just graduated, and this song really fits. I love it. Please write some more.

That was actully very depressing for me to read.I showed this to my mom and she said she had memories comn' back to her?Wht was all tht about?

i like that line, remember when i was you. i deffinatly like this song. ihope you keep writing too. good luck!
choco-penguin