Very interesting. I Liked it. It was a little confusing and i had to let it sink in, but it was funny and I liked it. Nice Job!

Very clever. You had me going there for a second.

hahaha very clever

ha ha! had us going for a second there. good job. looks like you won the challenge.

Thanks for making me laugh. This enters in a sad mood and then right at the end it suddenly changes. I think you excelled in the challenege you set yourself. Definitely quirky and great work!

Update, this could elaborate into something great

Hey, thanks for playing with my emotions like that! :) I was almost starting to cry because it reminded me of my old boyfriend, who I miss terribly, but the twist at the end made me laugh hysterically! Very creative!

hahaha. amazing. good twist!
~Hexic~

Very nice, great twist in the ending ^^

wow omg that was COOL! great twist i loved it! you completely fooled me. ai, i feel stupid nbow, lol. GREAT JOB!! and ooh, ooh, can you check out my updated fic? plz?? lolz
~k8

Wow! That's great! Didn't expect that all! Good Work! Check out some of my stuf, especially my, My Life, My Tamara, I need critiques on it and I would love to hear what you think!

Hmm... cool. I liked how you described it, and it felt pretty realistic. The twist at the end was nice! ^_^
Could you tell me how to italicize certain parts of the story? I'm quite new at this =)
Thanks!
Autumn Harvest

lol i like it. that's one obsessed fan.

ahaha! that's pretty funny, actually. struck me as rather odd though. ^_^ i guess that was the point. lovely job, i needed that little bit of randomness.

Great description, very well done. I was surprised to read the ending. Celebrity, eh? Hehe, anyway, you have loads of talent here, good work. :)