OMG! You totally had me fooled! I thought it was a gf-bf thing...LOL!

Very interesting. I Liked it. It was a little confusing and i had to let it sink in, but it was funny and I liked it. Nice Job!

Very clever. You had me going there for a second.

hahaha very clever

ha ha! had us going for a second there. good job. looks like you won the challenge.

Thanks for making me laugh. This enters in a sad mood and then right at the end it suddenly changes. I think you excelled in the challenege you set yourself. Definitely quirky and great work!

Update, this could elaborate into something great

Hey, thanks for playing with my emotions like that! :) I was almost starting to cry because it reminded me of my old boyfriend, who I miss terribly, but the twist at the end made me laugh hysterically! Very creative!

hahaha. amazing. good twist!
Hexic

Very nice, great twist in the ending

wow omg that was COOL! great twist i loved it! you completely fooled me. ai, i feel stupid nbow, lol. GREAT JOB! and ooh, ooh, can you check out my updated fic? plz? lolz
k8

Wow! That's great! Didn't expect that all! Good Work! Check out some of my stuf, especially my, My Life, My Tamara, I need critiques on it and I would love to hear what you think!

Hmm... cool. I liked how you described it, and it felt pretty realistic. The twist at the end was nice! _
Could you tell me how to italicize certain parts of the story? I'm quite new at this )
Thanks!
Autumn Harvest

lol i like it. that's one obsessed fan.

ahaha! that's pretty funny, actually. struck me as rather odd though. _ i guess that was the point. lovely job, i needed that little bit of randomness.