I love this poem when it began, and at the end I was so disheartened! Not because it was bad, mind you, but what an awful realization!! :'( *sniff* That's sinister. *shiver* It is my speculation (correct me if I'm wrong, of course, lol) that the 'child of the sky' is a creative person (a writer like us? Hehe) who is optimistic and always finding great fantasy in simple things and such inspiration...only to be met by a cynical, harsh world when reality comes back to slap her in the face. How terrible. *cries* ;_; Good poem, though. ^_~ Yay I love your poems because they get better every time! ~MJ

Reminds me of another poem I read, Weaver of the dreams or something. Goddess's are fun and even more fun to create ^_^

This is such a nice...poem.o.o It's very touching for something short. It holds alot of meaning...meh..I sound stupid. But I decided to review one of your poems after you reviewed mine.Thankyou! The Metalliace song is...erm...I can't remember.O.O Anyway,brilliant poem.:)...

This was beautiful. Very well-written. The first three stanzas created some lovely imagery, while I liked how the final stanza served as a sort of contrast which conveyed the reality of the world. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

A beautiful poem. I didn't get much of the symbolism, but I guess it's from your life experience. A very neat piece of work.
Adios!

I liked it a lot! Kind of a story within a poem, it's cool. I think you probably could extend it some. Its possible I think, depending on the angle you take with it. Bravo!
~Whiro~

Beautifully done and well written! I enjoyed reading this! Keep writing! ^_^

What a beautiful poem! I really like the second to last paragraph : "She Cried with the moon, etc..." Really pretty! Yeah, it could be extended on, but only to give it more of an ending. But don't change anything of the poem you have so far! It's great the way it is!

This is beautiful. Almost as a wonderment and curiosity that this child lost as she grew older. Wonderful job! And thanks for the review ^_^

"Follow your heart, follow your pen."
~ Ezz

Oh, absolutely beautiful. You have a wonderful talent! Please write poetry professionally!

I'd adore to read more. Please post more!

~Peach

PS If the whole thing is going to be poetry, you should categorize it under "poetry". If you plan on writing part of it as a story, however, what you have set is fine. :D

That was a wonderful poem...if only it could have been a tiny bit longer? I would have loved to read more!

Wow, what a great poem! It's wonderful in the way it sort of hints at secrets and a fuller story; it's very inviting to let the reader in. It has just enough to keep a reader interested. I'd give you suggestions...but I don't have any! ;)
>winged one