Haha, oh I hope you update soon. This chapter was lovely. The relationships and interaction are amazing, I don't know how you think of it.

Well done.
A x

its almost been 3 years, update or ill send the evil chicken army after you.

No...o...o... Idiot Dama!
Grr. He could have ruined both relationships.
No!

Wow, how did he find out?
Oh, I missed the whole, Edan kissing the prince... the chapter before cut off rather suddenly, was there a bit missed off. Please tell me if it is somewhere because I would rather like to read it and thought I might have accidentally skipped a chapter or something. Very good though. Damar's relationship is still edging slightly forward in liking for me I think.
Well done again. :) x

Same as always, wonderful writing, I don't know how you do it. Again a minute amount of slightly wrong grammar on the odd word but only if I'm being extremely picky. Well done. :) x

I love the way you develop the relationships and how the characters interact. I'm especially loving Damar's little relationship. I get the feeling the Lieutenant needs someone around like him. I just hope they stay together. Well done, one or two very minor grammatical mistakes but still great writing. :) x

Rather sweet and yet beautifully entrancing. Congratulations. :) x

Oh, patience. True virtue that. Love them all. Well done. :) x

Ha ha ha Ha! wonderful! I really love the humour in your writing even if there was one small section or so where the sentences didn't quite make sense. -the chamber pot bit.

Brilliant characters. Well done. :) x

Wha...? I wonder how he knew yet no-one else has noticed... I guess I'll find out if I read on. Another good chapter though I must point out that it is Capital, not Capitol. Just a point. :) x

Interesting. I love your characters. Another great chapter, well done, :) x

Oh-h-h, Cyrus. I do believe we may be having a little triangle thing coming soon. Hmm. I really liked the chapter though there were one or two very small (almost unnotable) grammatical mistakes. I liked it very much though. Well done. :) x

Haha, oh, that outfit sounded good. Well written, well done, just how I like it. :) x

W...o...W... Very much liking our dear Lieutenant now.

One more won't hurt. :)