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Devan 2008-05-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI've been waiting so so so long for an update, and I realize that it's almost been a year since you updated with Chapter 24. I think I might give up on checking for updates =/. But I really do enjoy your writing style, it's super funny, I'm just sad you never finished...
eightyeights 2008-04-22 ch 24,	abuseDUDE. I so want an Edan. Like you have no idea. He'd be, like, my little best friend that I take out when I want something exciting to happen. Heh, heh, heh...I wonder how he'd deal in chem lab... Your style of writing is amazing. It's totally absurd comedy, and it totally owns face. I especially like the bizarre things that should totally come up more in writing, like Edan's weird fear of chickens.
goldxleaves 2008-04-21 ch 24,	abuseSeriously, this was the most funny story I have ever read. Please update soon, ~goldxleaves (What kind of review is that? ^ Blah, I have no talent for reviewing, (is that even a word? -.-; ) Just to let you know, this is going to my Favorite Stories list, You're Awesome! I love Edan, by the way, He's so random... Please write more.
False-image 2008-04-03 ch 24,	abuseI haven't read this in forever!! It's still as hilarious as ever! I love Edan, he's so funny and bizarre! Please update soon!
Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis... 2008-03-30 ch 24,	abusemagnificant~! fun read! can't wait for next update!!
Kit-Kit 2008-03-18 ch 24,	abuseOh. My. God. I love you, do you know that? You are made of pure, unadultered, EPIC win for writing this. x3~ I am totally in love with everything about this story; the characters, your style of writing, and the idea of chickens being evil. Because they are, obviously. C:~ In fact, I'm so in love with this that I may have to draw you some fanart for it, to go in that large collection of yours. u NOW. STOP READING THIS REVIEW, AND GET WRITING! 8D
Anon-i-mous 2008-03-15 ch 24, anon.	abuseOh MY GOD this story is the funniest thing I've ever read. It's beyond amusing, I keep dying of laughter every time I read a chapter. It's an amazingly well-written story and your characters are hilarious. I love the way your story constantly has a light hearted feel to it even though something serious may be happening(complements of Edan). I like Edan he's a very strange character:P WRITE MORE SOON...please?
Minda 2008-03-15 ch 24, anon.	abuseI love it! It's positively the funniest thing I have ever read. Please, Please finish it. I beg you. Ooh this story makes me want to be all dramatic and I hate to miss an opportunity at being a drama queen. I will read anything you write.
Rika Onienkai 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseRegardless of how poorly you think of this story, I still want to read it. The characters are appealing and I want to read more, and I'm not a teenager. It is a pleasant read regardless of its flaws. I intend to read more of it now. :)
HazeleyedHoney 2008-03-02 ch 24,	abuseGod! Your story is awesome! Update sooner please.
b 2008-02-24 ch 24,	abuse... ... you mean it's NOT FINISHED?! ARGH!1!11!one!
True.Randomness 2008-02-19 ch 24,	abuseThis story is a blast to read! I mean it isn't written in a really great way but it isn't written terribly ether. It doesn't cause people to loose understanding of the situation and its unique way of being writen kind of add to its "charms." It is really funny and I love all the characters. I can't wait to read the next instalment!
bugger off 2008-02-15 ch 24,	abuseMy life was over. I’d been molested by a monkey—and not just any monkey, but a monkey in a pink tutu. ... I LOVE THAT SENTENCE! XD and i love those last three lines as well. “Damar, have you heard of the art of bitch-slap?” I asked calmly. “What?” “Here, let me show you.” ^^ HOHOHOHO. this is awesome stuff. puts thumb with swirly thingy on it up plz update, and do not EVER give up this story plz?? attempts puppy eyes yeah well, im gonna add this to my faves and alert list. yep.
Akiru-chan 2008-02-15 ch 24, anon.	abuseI LOVE this story and I'm honestly waitng with bated breath for the rest. I really hope you do plan on continuing, but I see you have not updated this for a while. I must say that Edan is one of my most favourite fictional characters to date so here's a really flamable looking bunny with which I'd like to lure him back out. smiles and hopes prayers for undates will be answered
Shiva Shakti 2008-02-12 ch 1,	abuse"Let’s be honest with ourselves: this story is bad." ARE YOU CRAZY? This is possibly one of the best stories I've ever read on fictionpress (or I can't believe you're recommending people to skip this story! You might be critic about your writing, but really, the number of reviews might say something about the utter goodness of this story. It's so funny and sweet. I love the characters and the way you write. Edan is my favorite character EVER. Oh, I did the quiz and I'm Artemis. Beware! Ò.Ó The art of bitch-slap is genious! Please update! I can't wait to see Dama and Zephyr making up (and out xD), and the day Royce discover Edan is a boy. I'm very curious about Edan's brother and Zephyr's secret. Sorry for any English mistakes, I'm Brazilian (yay!). Thank you for the AMAZING story!

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