Whoa ...!Urara is creepy! I think I like this story more now because it IS getting interesting! Keep up the Great work!

wow. i luv this story. itz twisted, but it really draws you in... im hooked. i relli enjoy reading all of these tyoes of stories, but most of them feel a necessity to ramble on and on about y the charaters are so twisted, then end up soundin shallow and whiny, urs has a really nice element of mystery and angst, as well as a gud plot. can't wait to hear more!

WAH! POOR SASUKE! HE'S GONNA DIE!

Finally! A new chapter! Good as always...And No...I dont have a Kanako T-shirt..>.>...

...to me? For obvious reasons..?

IM me and explain, ok?

Why is it that every Shoujo-ai story I read revolves around some psychopathic, scheming, murderous fiend named Kanako? You're doing it, The Rope Miko (a.k.a. Chocolate Fudge, a.ka. Mint, a.k.a. Kanako6) is doing it, and hell, soon Pink Lemonade will be doing it too, if she already hasn't

Not that I mind...

Hell, I have already done so in a fan fic story of mine!

As always, damn good work. Keep it up.

P.S. - Hail Odin, and while we're at it, Hail Satan.

*Maniacal Laughter.*

Very interesting, indeed. I would be more descriptive, but I don't want to give away spoilers about such a wonderful story.

That author I was referring to earlier, is still here (under a different penname), and it seems she reviewed your stories, adding you to her favorites no less. Utterly delightful. FP-dot-com truly is the mental ward for us sickos who do not fit in with the common majority (I speak for myself in this manner as well).

Praise Odin.

*Slits himself with a dagger.*

Masochism is a good thing, if done right.

Good chapter, contrary to what you originally believed.

P.S. - Praise be to Odin.

*Chuckles*

I am pretty sure this story will be quite good. Anything involving psychotic angst is alright with me.

*Flips open a retractable dagger, finds some random old schmuck on the street and slices him open.*

Praise be to Odin, this sacrifice is for thou. \m/

*Applauds*

Your style of writing is quite similar to one who used to hang around these parts, though I'm not sure if she left or simply changed her penname.

Death... Lust... Such wonderful story components they make... And this is only the prologue, no les.

As a reformed Nordic Viking, I look foward to whatever sick, twisted events lying ahead.

I'm glad to see that you're still updating. While this chapter was a bit teenage angst-ish, it's still an interesting read. It seems that your style chaged a bit. ::Shrug:: As always, keep up the great work, and I look foward to the next chapter!!

~The One and Only

Yeah! Great story! Kinda twisted..but thats probably wh I like it.

Great job on this story. Short as it is, that doesn't matter once you get reading. Beautifully written, and no grammatical gripes. Strong opening, too. Very impressive.
Looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Not a bad story. Grammer, and spelling are good to my knowledge (which isn't much). The story is pretty interesting. Sadly I don't think I'll read later chapters due to the nature of the story. Good job anyways though.

It may have been a bit short, but this chapter was just as wonderful and well written as always! It seems that all stories have to slow down at points to introduce some new plot twist or character. You've done some great work here. Keep it up!
~The One and Only
ps. sorry my review is so late in coming