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abbsi 2009-10-22 . chapter 15
Too cute. What I wish is a little look further ahead. :) Or, really, just more. This story is a bit like your favorite sweet, it just doesn't seem to be enough. ;)
And as for smut... honestly, if all people want in a story is smut, there are websites set up that are almost exclusively smut. No condemnation intended, smut is great if that's what you're looking for, but that warm and fuzzy feeling and cuteness is awesome, too.
AsylumFox 2009-09-15 . chapter 15
Ah, just when I was feeling the depression of having found nothing decent to read online as of late, I stumbled across this jewel of a story. I have to say, I really love the names. Stories like yours make me fall in love with names like Klause and Sebastian. Another thing I really liked was the way you really captured the high society talking pattern and intonations. Though, in honesty I love the whole thing. =] Thanks for putting lots of effort and love into the story! It was a great read.
xXxzOMBiECANdiexXx 2009-08-11 . chapter 3
He Nathan's last name is lane!OMG Nathan Lane is like my favorite actor of all time!That my friend earned you a favorite.my 1st favorite in fact!
You took my favorite verginaty! XD
person 2009-06-16 . chapter 15
it's good. i mean, you forgot a lot of the punctuation and used "bah," way too much-who actually says that? just wondering. but since it's old, that's ok. and it was cute. :D
wiggle shoes 2009-06-03 . chapter 15
This story is so cute and playful. And just was really fun to read all together. :)
frogs of war 2009-05-20 . chapter 15
That was a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing it.
Liteupmynight 2009-03-22 . chapter 15
Wow, I love this story. Every couple of months I come back and read it and fall more in love with it every time. It makes me smile :D Sebastion is far, far, far too cute with Klause :D (In a good way of course)
I bet a ton of people have asked for a sequel of a sort, but I'm going to add my self to the ranks and mention that if you ever make a oneshot or something that shows them later in life, I'm sure no one would protest... *hint, hint*
Well, as I said, I love it and it makes my day whenever I read it :D
NejiFan 2009-01-14 . chapter 15
I love that story. It was too cute for words. Bastion is the best. His family is from hell and still manage to produce 2 semi stable sons. Good job. That story was very believable. Honey, you have a great gift for storytelling, don't ever stop. Pity you didn't give much details on the pranks though, unless I'm missing something.
JtheChosen1 2008-11-28 . chapter 15
great story! now onto ur other stuff!
Kei White 2008-11-20 . chapter 15
I love this story. It so cute. I really like how you seemed to make the characters come to life. Well, I'm off to read the side story.
Makai Tenshi 2008-10-25 . chapter 15
I have not read a story this entertaining in ages. The entire thing, from start to finish, was just fantastic (one of the few stories where I never got the urge to skim or skip ahead). The ending just made me smile. It's so lighthearted, based much more on character interactions than anything else. There weren't many conflicts (what conflicts there were were resolved really smoothly with no blood or grit), nor character development, but I didn't mind because as you said, it was just meant to be cute and funny. The setup was great, and so was the suspense and how slowly you revealed more about Bastion's life and past and family and Chris. Chris Mooreland being a decent human being was about the last thing I expected. He and Regan are so cute together xD. I think my favorite character is Benny, especially when she's interacting with Bastion. And Klause, we can't forget Klause. Truthfully, I thought the best thing about Klause was his internal monologue, which was awesome and funny from the get-go, but kinda died down around the middle-to-end (he turned from very interesting with lots of potential to just supportive perfect boyfriend with no flaw). Nevertheless, very sweet story, and thanks for writing!
Ain't.gonna.take.me.alive 2008-10-01 . chapter 15
Really sweet
PoertyQueen 2008-08-10 . chapter 15
I actually loved this story and I couldn't help but smile though the whole thing. Many hugs and hopes you write more.
girl-in-america 2008-06-29 . chapter 15
Aww! I finished it :[ oh well. It really was the most feel good, happy, sweet story I've read so far. The only really crappy part was that it had to end.
Martin 2008-06-02 . chapter 8
Okay here goes... the plot would be of some kind of interest is Sebastion was actually ten years old but as the story speaks about a seventeen years old teenager who will turn eighteen in a couple of days, well, lets just say the "guardianship" from that guardian who actually is supposed to seem sympathetic makes her look pathetic. She is nosy, pushy and nosey for an employee. Would be quite good if the guy was younger.
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