Reviews for One demon's Quest

Reviews For: One demon's Quest

KaronePrincess 2005-12-10 ch 9,	Hi Sailor Sun 16, I'm KaronePrincess! I'm just finished reading the story. The plot is very intereting! A lot of conflicts and events! The part between Leon and Matt talks are so FUNNY!! Obviously two are jealous of each other over Kim!! It made me laughed aloud..ha-ha! Please update more!
Elf Swordsman 2004-01-30 ch 1,	Very Interesting! yeah... I know you! hahahahaha! I get to be in the story! yay! ^_^
serpentynepearl 2004-01-07 ch 9,	hugs Lance plushie I LOVE LANCE!! Okay... Good chapter, can't wait for the next one!
serpentynepearl 2003-12-09 ch 8,	Ahh... Such angst in the world... I just love this chapter. Keep it up!
serpentynepearl 2003-11-19 ch 7,	OMG! I forgot to review you! wails Anyhow, great chapter -- except you keep on spelling the word "angel" as "angle"! Anyhow, all you need to do is watch your spelling a bit, and you've got one GREAT chappie!
serpentynepearl 2003-10-25 ch 6,	^^ YAY! New chappie! It's a good one, plus great improvement on spelling. A+!
serpentynepearl 2003-09-23 ch 5,	Yay! More sadness, despair, shock, ..., SPELLING MISTAKES! faints Ah well, it's really freaky that True has a Hate as a lover and that Keyona for a kid... but very good chapter except for said spelling mistakes. GOOD JOB!
serpentynepearl 2003-09-09 ch 4,	GO LANCE! 'Kay, I love the whole doubting stuff with Lance (I'm currently addicted to much sadness, angst, madness, and despair), so GOOD JOB ON THAT! Come out with Chappie 5 soon!
serpentynepearl 2003-08-20 ch 3,	Satsuki: Chapter 3! Chapter 3! Chapter 3! Yay!waves pom poms wildly "Sivr": Alright! Good job on Chapter 3, I love the thing on all of them "trying to not fight when Kim was there" thing. Other than the fact a find the few grammatical and/or spelling mistakes a bit annoying, you're OK by me!
serpentynepearl 2003-08-17 ch 2,	All right, Chapter 2! You go girl! Okies, so, Kim gets taken instead of Mat, they have to save her, Mat acts like an idiot instead of coming quietly, True is actually acting kinda evil for a girl with that name of hers. One would think that it would actually sort of influence her judging with maybe a trial for Mat or something. But, names and looks are deceiving, and True is obviously muddled over Charity's death. I'm likin' the way the psycology's working here. I'm just addicted right now to lots of angst, madness, and suffering in books and stories right now. It's very addictive. Now, last quote by Mat,"And that should still be my burden to bare,not hers!" I'm liking it and all, but it sounds a bit cliche at the same time. It's the usual heroic act of coughs "bravery" but, sort of stupid if you look at it. Yet that's the way the world works. People just rush right in without thinking and the world calls in brave and heroic. God, I have a feeling he's gonna be in big trouble if he doesn't learn to actually use his gray matter. Other than that, it's a great chapter, I have a feeling Lance is moving higher in my mental poll of who's number one. Weakness is death! (I love that.) In the mean time, I also would like to see you write a bit more (if you can and if you have enough time). You've got a lot of potential (and I know this, most of my friends love writing and are pretty good too) and a story about what happened between Mat and Charity would be great! Satsuki: "Yeah! Go Saiwor! looks around wildly Hunh? Where'd everybody go? Are you just leaving me here? SIVR!! sniffs and starts asking in a very babyish voice Saiwor, where did Mat and Kim and Lance and Rain and Despair and those guards go? I saw cookies!
serpentynepearl 2003-06-17 ch 1,	Thanx for the review, I never really expected anyone to actually do it. Anyhow, I like how you start the story, with all this conflict and despair in Mat's life, and then he falls in love, and then ends with 3 guys fighting over Kim. Can't wait for chapter 2!

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