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Reviews For: If You Look in the Eyes of a Stranger

aviatrix
2003-08-14
ch 1,
when you say the same word over and over, it starts losing its meaning. find some synomyms for 'stranger', maybe. a little repetition can be effective, but too much is really annoying.
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