Reviews for the disregarded wall

Hot Tea Addict 2007-06-15 ch 1,	I love how you can take something so plain and mundane as a wall in a classroom and turn it into beautiful poetry.
Arynnl 2003-07-17 ch 1,	thats cool, its really challenging to write about inanimate objects and yours gave the wall human qualities very nice A+
glitterjewele 2003-06-18 ch 1,	yay! bored in english again! i love it when wishes come true! :P and you know, i think i like this one even BETTER than the first one! so much killer imagery . . . 'tis simply impossible not to get sucked in. i have this really amazing picture of the wall in question in my mind from reading it ~ so once again you've made it come to life for me (insofar as walls come to life, that is :P). t'was difficult indeed to select favorite lines from this one deep breath here they are: "you look so weather beaten/chewed and eaten" (awesome sound to that bit), "pearly eggshell," "guilty desktop" (made me smile), "aged by reckless students," "unintentional graffiti," and "embracing us like the Giving Tree." one note: you use the word "age(d)" twice, withing three lines of one another, so perhaps if you changed one of them (preferably the first) to a different word . . .? other than that, i'd say this is marvelously close to perfection. :) wonderful job! loved it muchly!
Stoffpferd 2003-06-17 ch 1,	Aw...tell me how you manage to write so damn beautiful poems?
Miamouse 2003-06-17 ch 1,	lovely description, a good use of an english lesson. Mia :)