I love how you can take something so plain and mundane as a wall in a classroom and turn it into beautiful poetry.

thats cool,
its really challenging to write about inanimate objects
and yours gave the wall human qualities
very nice
A+

yay! bored in english again! i love it when wishes come true! :P and you know, i think i like this one even BETTER than the first one! so much killer imagery . . . 'tis simply impossible not to get sucked in. i have this really amazing picture of the wall in question in my mind from reading it ~ so once again you've made it come to life for me (insofar as walls come to life, that is :P). t'was difficult indeed to select favorite lines from this one *deep breath* here they are: "you look so weather beaten/chewed and eaten" (awesome sound to that bit), "pearly eggshell," "guilty desktop" (made me smile), "aged by reckless students," "unintentional graffiti," and "embracing us like the Giving Tree." one note: you use the word "age(d)" twice, withing three lines of one another, so perhaps if you changed one of them (preferably the first) to a different word . . .? other than that, i'd say this is marvelously close to perfection. :) wonderful job! loved it muchly!

Aw...tell me how you manage to write so damn beautiful poems?

lovely description, a good use of an english lesson.

Mia :)