This could get really meaningful, if someone wanted to analyze it... (Translation: You definitely set a tone and just let that say something itself.) I'm officially a fan. ;)

wow...this is really good for an in-class kind of thing o.o...*is awed* I was sitting there and could imagine it all. For approximately thirty seconds, I was the girl, and...*shivers* marvellous.

this was really good, i liked the first part especially. you know, the first, like, three or four lines. its an interesting way to have it end also

hm, it's strange how such beautiful things can come out of boring and weird moments. I loved it. Keep it up! =D

you should be bored in english class more often. :P really, this was great. you did such an amazing job creating the scene and the feelings to go along with it ~ i kinda felt like i was the girl in the poem, it was awesome. hehehe. as always, it flowed beautifully (i'm officially jealous of your knack for that now, btw). my favorite lines were: "on an island in her mind" (fantastic original image), "it did every time" (made a huge impact), "standing as if she were someone extraordinary" (because i can relate, actually :P), and "she assumed the role of superstar/and was idolized" (that just had this ring to it, and it reminded me of something . . . can't remember what at the moment so it'll probably bug me into insanity *grr*). nice work! and thank me not for the reviews, you deserve every one of them ;). jolly good show, old chap!

hm interesting...oddly enough i was waiting for a twisted ending where the girl wakes up and realizes she never did that...it never came...