I just love the way you use repetition in your poem.. How you mould it so well.. The point covered here is good too.. It is something many people can relate too.. The ending was fantastic.. So painfully honest and true.. Loved it.. Great rhyming..

Nice poem, makes me think about thinking twice about someone.

Wow...such an amazing piece...I really like your poems!

i like this one too. hmm, im thinking about putting this one on my wall. i put all my favorite poetry up on my wall.

This is really cool!

Definitely my favourite of yours so far. This was something I can relate to. Very good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Another bus ride poem? ;)
I love the repetition...I love everything about it!
How talented you are
*awaits for you next*

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its very good poem! nicely done. i use to have smthg like that posted too, but its down now... but yeah, its great how you repeat the line, gets the pt more across (though it was obvious w/out it...) i know what i mean! lol... nah nah, its relaly good :D