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Werecat99 2003-12-27 . chapter 1
Sad, but beautiful. Good work.
Bamboti 2003-12-19 . chapter 1
neat (not sure what else to say)
CA
Roadside Dryer 2003-11-18 . chapter 1
WoW! Very good! I love it! Thank you for the review. I have heard of Ann Rice and would like to read one of her books soon as i get my hands on one! I love the line 'Suicidally throw themselves from the heavens!" Love it love it love! Your fav band is a perfect circle, mine to! I also like Evanescence who reminds me of a perfect circle alot! Love the poem it's going on my fave stories list!
darkdeath568 2003-11-15 . chapter 1
Nice...A lot of death has happened in my life so I get it. Really good poem.
Faith Teigra 2003-08-25 . chapter 1
I love this line:
"They shimmer as they
Suicidally throw themselves
From the heavens."

Great original creative style.
Linael 2003-07-31 . chapter 1
O! I like! Very very well written!
AnorD 2003-07-16 . chapter 1
*smiles* this is deep yet true. I feel the same when surrounded by rain and or snow. It almost feels as though the dead are watching over us *smiles*

farewell
romanticvomitx 2003-06-22 . chapter 1
cool. i like this. i like the last paragraph. it's realy...well..how can i say this? its like the stuff i like to read. good job.
DEMivamp44calBFG 2003-06-19 . chapter 1
another delightful poem, it gave me a shiver up the spine, lol. you might consider revising "None one the same as another"
Fox 2003-06-17 . chapter 1
This poem was really cool. I really liked how you linked the memories of souls to weather.
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