The title definitely drew me more to this piece, and I love it. However, the Good-bye at the end kind of made it weaker for me, but it was still great overall.

My mouth waters...

Oh, I like. Fragmented sentences are so cool when used correctly (or however it's supposed to be used).. and the imagery is somewhat fractured and mysterious.. a good touch to the poem. Keep it up!
Happy Writing,
Aislinn

Love the descriptions. very good. Very different and creative.

Dark and angsty, but rather good. I liked the gory details.
And thanks for the reviews.

AH. Wow... This is sort of creepy, but I really like it. (Yay...)
-Az

0.0. Very nice. My sister loves vampirey stuffs, and I guess a little of that rubs off on me. Well done.

Great job! Normally I don't like poems without descriptions, but this one hit my weak side and I'm glad it did.

I love the repition of emotional words the most.

WOW THAT WAS "STRATCH MY NAILS DOWN MY ARM" GOOD. (WHICH IS A GOOD THING) THAT WAS BOLD, I LOVE IT.

cool...

Ok there. Calm down. Gotta keep my blood vessels AWAY from you from now on :P.

Crepyness... Very good job on this one!

That is really...weird bordering on psychotic but it ain't bad in my eyes.

What a way to die...

this one is really good. you are a very good writer,keep on writting