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| DarK-FreEdoM 2004-06-13 ch 7,   | Wow.. I love this story! Keep up the writing and I can't wait to see what will happen next! -DarK-FreEdoM |
| Danielle of Airls 2004-03-13 ch 7, | NO! She can't forget him! There has to be a happy ending and then they live happily ever after and all that other nice disney stuff that characters do! Stupid Kenneth! *whacks him on the head* GET A CLUE, KID! Heheh... Anyways... What I meant to say was, please write more, because this story is REALLY good! ~*Danielle of Airls*~ |
| DarkLove 2003-08-21 ch 7, | good, sister dear, very good. keep up the good work sis. peace. |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-08-20 ch 7, | this is by far my favorite chapter, its really good in showing how she feels and the reality of it, applauds more soon |
| StarShineSparkleDust 2003-08-20 ch 7, | Oh no! I feel so sorry for that character of yours...omg how embarressing I forgot her name...oh wel Anyway yeah dude as the blackeyed peas qoute in their song 'Where is the Love?' You character needs some sweet lovin in her life...I can't wait to see what ya do next ;) |
| Endowment's Seraph 2003-08-20 ch 7, | Love bites. I wouldn't know, wait, yes I do. the story, It's really good, I'm not as big a klutz as one would think, sure I might run into the occasional wall or door, or trip over myself, or fall down the stairs, or trip over somebody else, or a crack in the side walk, but I don't fall, often. Right, okay. It's really good write more! ~Mel |
| cbprice25 2003-08-20 ch 7, | Stuff didn't really happen in this chapter. You basically spent seven paragraphs just saying that she had fallen for him and she couldn't do anything except cry at the fact he likes someone else. A lot of stuff here would've been better off left unsaid, as we (the readers) already know it. It's be better if you got some action going, dialogue. I hope you update soon! |
| funkeemunqee 2003-08-20 ch 7, | i love ur story! =D |
| DarkLove 2003-08-12 ch 6, | ah,sister dear u really are getting good. i love it. keep up the good work. if not well u kno what wil happen. love ya (not!) j/k keep it up. |
| cbprice25 2003-08-11 ch 6, | It's a good chapter. Don't know how I missed you posting it, but I did. You kind of confused me at the beginning, I wondered if I had accidentally skipped a chapter, but you explained that quickly, so it wasn't that confusing now that I think of it. I really have to stop rambling. Update soon. It's good. |
| StarShineSparkleDust 2003-08-11 ch 6, | lol your fic is so cute...i love it |
| DarK-FreEdoM 2003-08-11 ch 6, | Poor Grace!! I hope things get better for her! But maybe being a klutz is a good thing for her to be around Ken. DarK-FreedoM |
| FamousOneLiners 2003-08-11 ch 6, | i wonder what will happen next? ::stupid girlfrend:: |
| all-american-girl50 2003-08-11 ch 6, | poor grace! u should have grace get a boyfriend, and then make ken jealous! lol, sry, but i just love drama, hehe. so update soon! |
| Hawk Mage 2003-08-11 ch 6, | This is such a great story. I love this story. I really love this. |