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| The Dark Wizard 2003-08-22 ch 1,  | This is good poetry, but easy fodder for "Thursday Night Fiction Press" I didnt think i would get such intellectual guests! |
| Princess Chloe 2003-07-29 ch 1,  | Oh, tiger. I like this one! Just the right amount of suspense and drama. You go girl! ~Chloe |
| Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2003-07-07 ch 1, | This poem is really good, I love the way how it says, untouched from blood, lol, I don't know why, oh well, I like the idea, Keep up the good work Caity |
| cosmo-queen 2003-07-06 ch 1, | Very well-written poem. You created some good imagery. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Modern Poet 2003-06-29 ch 1, | Hey! Good work. I like the ending. |
| swift sky silver 2003-06-28 ch 1, | wow, great imagery... this is wonderful. keep writing=0) |
| inconsequential me 2003-06-26 ch 1, | Wow. I think this is the most visualized poem you've written...Well, in my opinion it is. I love how you set the scene without using too many words...You were down to the point, and brief, left just enough room for my mind to wander, but gave enough for my mind to wander...does that make any sense? i'm afraid i'm just rambling now... but it's a truly amazing poem, and i love the idea behind it... kudos. |
| JadedSecrets 2003-06-17 ch 1, | Kool! I really like this one! Did you just make it up? really good! *Jade* |