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| anaymous 2005-01-21 ch 2,  | Your story is really good and suspensefull. The only thing is that in the 2nd chapter, one paragraph it is the day of and the next it is ten years later. Other than that, Please update it! |
| Dark-Shadow-Girl 2003-11-26 ch 3,  | It's very good. I like it a lot! please add more soon! |
| aims80 2003-07-06 ch 3, | Keep up the good work. Luv Aims :) |
| Desiree Dee 2003-07-03 ch 3, | A little short, and confusing, but I'm sure all will be answered in the next chapter. |
| Desiree Dee 2003-07-02 ch 2, | Im still intruiged. Can't wait to see what comes next. I see that you take the time to edit your chapters. That is most definitely a plus see you on the flip side. |
| Just a Random Reader 2003-07-02 ch 2, | aw..thats soo sad. i hope her mother ends up finding her...write more please! |
| Prick Monkey420 2003-07-02 ch 1, | kewl |
| Desiree Dee 2003-06-19 ch 1, | I like it. It is definitely a breath of fresh air from all of the fanfiction that I've been reading lately. I especially have to comment on your grammar. Thank you for having the good sense to make your work readable. Keep it up, I'm always up for a good mystery. |
| Morodiel Dunna 2003-06-17 ch 1, | Nice! I'm liking it! I'll tell you as someone who's been here a while- be sure to double check for grammar errors or someone really rude is gonna come along and flame you. I like where it's going! Good luck! Namarie, O.o The Notorious Morodiel Dunna o.O |
| Just a Random Reader 2003-06-17 ch 1, | aw...thats sad. I like the way you ended it though. I love when books/stories leaveme hanging. Are you planning on writing more (please say yes!) |
| Rhiev 2003-06-17 ch 1, | hey guys. I would really appreciate input to see if I should continue this story. |