You never told me you'd updated! This is really good, sis! Looks like I gotta watch my back...

I thought it was really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, good!Especially thier breakfast-it sounded tasty!

i think you should get this published, i do a lot of babysitting and i know kids would love this

Lol!! This is the greatest story! Please continue!

Oh, and also, could you R&R my story, The Attack of the Six Year Olds? It's not finished yet, I'm going to continue as soon as I get one or more review.

woo! i like this! way funny!

it's good, and i like the word fnooglepuss and the other names used, it's interesting, but it moves a bit tad quickly and hectically for children to follow, but a lot of that depends on the intended reading age, so meh, 'tis good.