For a work of art like this, I can say only one thing: perfection.

this is so beautiful...(p.s. if you're free, will you R&R my work too? :O)

summerdazed

one more thing, can I get your permission to print out some of your poems.I love them so much and I don't really want to go online everytime I want to read them. :O) I promise they won't go anywhere else, I just want to keep them.

Write back and tell me if the permission is granted. If not, then never mind, thanks anyway and keep up your awesome work. :O)

summerdazed

Wow, great imaginary, I can almost see the rose.

Also, I must admit, some of my earlier haiku aren't very good. Thank you for being honest with me when you reviewed. I think I'm improving these days, but I'll leave that up to you to deside .

Bravo! Bravo! Excellent! Probably the best I've read from you. Write more of these!

Beautiful... absolutely beautiful... I loved it! I think that 'frail' and 'fragile' both are great.

Duo Maxwell Is Mine No Touchy

Ultimate Schuyler, Love it!

So crisp and beautiful. Reminds me of Japanese haiku. Please write more.

I love this one! The imagery is awesome. You're good, girl!

nice imagery0)

Short...I like it. Um...write more, I guess. Nice use of words...

Don't drown on us! Your haiku is beautiful - I loved the imagry!

CoolBeans18s

Oh... That was very beautiful. A perfect little image.

Very beautiful!

That is great work.

Heart of the Sword

i liked the rose part, but the rest didn't quite match. i think you should've cut some words out and put in a 'finally' or something. but overall, it's still pretty good! keep up the writing! i can tell you're very good with descriptive words! -