I really like how you described everything. And don't worry, you can't be torn in half forever. Good luck to you!

At least you aren't the only one in the world who has done exactly that. So don't feel too bad...

Boy, do I ever know how that feels. We seem to be in the same spot. Anyway, good poem, and keep it up.

=( I empathize... (Haha, sry for this review...I'm speechless.)

Nice poem, it doesn't fllow very well, but you get your point accross. Not my favorite style.

Oh, you might get more reviews if you disabled the feature which blocks all anonymous reviews.