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| Enaid 2007-02-27 ch 12, | abusei really like this story but i see that it has not been updated for a while... any reason. i would love it if you decided to start up on it again. update soon! |
| shit2makebliss 2004-11-30 ch 12, | abuseThis story is amazing. The plot is so well formed and the characters are wonderfully developed! I can't really think of anything else you need to do, except write more chapters! I will be eagerly awaiting your updates. By the way, this is my first ever review. I am sorry if I did it wrong. |
| K-razy Grrl 2004-11-26 ch 1, | abusePlease, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, UPDATE! |
| Rachel 2004-11-11 ch 12, anon. | abusewoah..this story rocks my soks..*cough*i really should stop listening 2 my friends sayings.lol oo i wonder who set is i want 2 find out so hurry and update!The past is now another land Far beyond my reach Invaded by insidious Foreign bodies, foreign speech Where timeless joys of childhood Lie broken on the beach The present is an empty space Between the good and bad A moment leading nowhere Too pointless to be sad But time enough to lay to waste Every certainty I had The future is a barren world From which I can't return Both heartless and material Its wretched spoils not my concern Shining like an evil sun As my childhood treasures burn Shining like an evil sun As my childhood treasures burn sry i was looking up lyrics for one of my songs from Aida and i thought i pretty sounding..heheh well UPDATE |
| pyro36x 2004-11-11 ch 12, | abuseoh pleas eupdate! |
| K-razy Grrl 2004-10-07 ch 12, | abuseplease please please please update! |
| Devonshirelass 2004-09-04 ch 11, | abuseI'm really enjoying this story, but unfortunatly there seems to be an error on this server, because I cannot get to chapter 12, and am so gutted... If it helps, all that I have read so far, I thought was pure genius, and had me glued to the computer desk. Keep it up! |
| Larien Telrunya 2004-09-03 ch 12, | abuseGreat story! Please write more!! I havent gotten to read the last half yet, but I will post a more detailed review soon. Good luck!! :) |
| Cryptic-Skye 2004-08-29 ch 12, | abuseYa! Finally, an update. btw: is that last but about the doors in a temple, the palace or a undisclosed location (ie. who cares, it's just a door?!) Ah! Just read over it again - Ok, it's in the bedroom. Got that now. O! Alanna seems to have some sort of power! But 'launching him far into the wall' - does that mean that his body was imprinted in the wall? A bit odd if I may say... Argh! Egypt needs a backbone. Just declare war on the Hitties and be done with it. Either that, or Alanna should show them what happens when you REALLY annoy her. |
| LadySapphireNight 2004-08-29 ch 12, | abuseYay!You updated!I don't know if I reviewed with this name or not, but I LOVE this story, and i can't wait for the next chapter!Please update soon! :) |
| SKT 2004-08-24 ch 11, anon. | abuseWow, I just got back from Japan and decided to read some of the things that I had been reading before I left and I am very happy that you have updates. I love this story!! I can't wait to find out what will happen!! Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
| A Twist of Fate 2004-07-03 ch 11, | abusewow..i love this story!!..its so good..u have to update soon! |
| K-razy Grrl 2004-07-03 ch 11, | abuseWhen Valerie first woke up, and walked into the room, how did she know what Khep was saying since he was speaking in Arabic? (And it was AWESOME! Hurry & update! Please!) |
| K-razy Grrl 2004-06-23 ch 10, | abuseOh please hurry & post the next chapter! I want to know what happens! :( |
| A Different Kind of Yellow 2004-06-17 ch 10, | abuseThankyou for the email update! Sorry I didn't give you a review on Sunday, but I was away on a trip (in band up the East coast of Scotland) and was staying in a haunted castle turned Youth hostel for three nights!! This is really good still, but I hope you'll update this week! Not tomorrow, I have a party to go to, a friend down the village's 17th. So, anyway, please continue as soon as you can, and check out my stories on my account and on my other one(Glenfinnan Girlie). Cheers Ma Dears! |