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| CK Shorty 2006-04-04 ch 4,  | abuseSo far I really like this story. It's funny for one, but it sounds realistic and few can pull it off. You did good (: I love this story. And the chapters. CK |
| cpd3 2006-03-24 ch 20, | abuseVery cute story. Good characters with unexpected twists. I liked the ending; short but sweet. |
| MorwenSteelsheen 2005-09-29 ch 19, | abuseI am really impressed with this story. I amazed how real and authentic it sounds. I am really looking forward to your next piece of writing. |
| Renzie 2005-08-22 ch 20, | abuseWow! Awesome! This story really reminds me of "Good Grief" by Lolly Winston. It's a SUPERB story, much like your own in that sense. I strongly suggest you go purchase that book! I couldn't stop reading. It was amazing ^^ This is too, by the way. Love the storyline! I liked how to chapters were short. They were like mini adventures! I'm off to read the sequel! < 3 Congrats for all of your accomplishments, Renzie |
| Renzie 2005-08-22 ch 9, | abuseHahaha xD I loved the questions! So funny! I'll continue reading this now. |
| Renzie 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abuse;-; AW! I hate workaholics. My parents are both work-robots. In fact, it's one in the morning and I'm home alone. Anyway, enough about me. I MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS! But like I said...it's one in the morning ^^' I WILL get back to this one :3 |
| burnonyou 2005-07-08 ch 4, | abusehey, i like the story so far.but you havent really given the characters any description. |
| cariluv 2005-01-02 ch 20, | abuseVery nice. It's about time I stumbled upon a good story on this website. :) |
| Romantic Idiot 2004-09-07 ch 20, | abuseVery cool! =D Lizzy :D |
| Disgruntled Pen 2004-08-20 ch 20, | abuseThat was so good. I couldn't move myself to do anything until I finished this. I liked it a lot. And now, since I've completed it, I'm off to bed. Well done! |
| Twizzlers 2004-08-10 ch 20, | abuseWow, that was excellent. I just read the whole thing straight through while I'm supossed to be reading mythology for school, and I'm a little sad that I didn't catch it earlier because now it's finished. But that's okay because it really was good and very well written and as long as you're writing a sequel, it's okay. So, very good job and I think I'm going to go read the sequel now. >>Twizz |
| hjgtfdchjmjh 2004-06-02 ch 19, | abuseOh god this seems so real and much more intense than the usual love stories on FictionPress. Real is the key word here, I think. The way these two are in love makes me think of the way I'm in love. I can actually remember feeling and doing some of these things. Freaky... |
| ShadowPharoh 2004-05-16 ch 20, | abusewhat a cute ending!! ~SHADOW~ P.S. thanks for the review. i enjoyed reading your story alot! |
| ShadowPharoh 2004-05-16 ch 19, | abusecool. i learnt something about native americans! ~SHADOW~ |
| ShadowPharoh 2004-05-16 ch 18, | abuseaw. . . .how adorable. a cutsy lovey-dovey moment! ~SHADOW~ |