This is what I think the film cruel intentions would be like if it was a book. obviously with large differences, but the style. I like it..

I like this story, it's well-written and the lead is very intelligent (if a little warped lol ^_^) And whilst I've liked ther characters more, for some reason I seem to also like Yuki. I think it's the way you have wrote her, so well done, you have made me write a very domineering character, who I wouldn't usually have liked. So far...I have yet more chapters to read though. (^-^)

Good lord. You and all the other associated writer(s) have truly conjured a masterpiece beyond words. I'll admit--it took me a couple of months to finally get to the end. When I began reading this, I wasn't very much into the sense of bi-sexuality, etc. through fiction. Gradually, of course, that changed dramatically and I at last found the time to read Yuki's Diary.

The story itself is extremely misleading. The fact that Kanako was behind every page and every character just blew me away. An ending so simple; it could've had a bit more depth to it. Yet, it still retained snippets of the originality found in all of the chapters and concluded the mind-bending tail beautifully.

I'll say I loved the story, and I'll say I despised it at the same time. I admired Yuki and was curious about Kanako during the earlier recordings. I found Kotone a bit of an annoying add-in, and just barely got by her at the end.

A great story has been made and done. I hope to look into more of your works soon enough...

Oh dear, just finished this and I have to say that the turn towards to dark, creepy side, well.. it seems odd to me right now. But I'm pretty sure that I'll be thinking of this fanfic later on and how the turn was absolutely wonderful. I don't really appreciate the angst in a story until later. Hmm.

But wonderful job, it was a great read. Definitely.

*sigh* it was really a wonderful story. Until I decided to read the reviews(after reading pages 1 through 20) and land my eyes on a small yet at the same time, a very large spoiler.

Since then, I've been screaming in the insides of my head everytime suspence arrives until I finally got to page 29. =)

And page 29 was quite.. ah, I dunno, eerie. o_o yes. too eerie.

Woah, anyways, I'm hoping to find time and read the rest. Kanako rocks.

Good start, I really liked reading this one...it's my favorite at the moment...well, I'll be back to read soon, sorry I don't have much more to comment on.

Velsper-sama

Your style is indeed dark and twisted. But that draws me in. This is absolutly beautiful, saddening in its own way but it is beautiful. I love it for that, it intrigues me makes me want to learn more. Its hard to resist such temptation. You seem quite knowledegable in certain feilds, quite afew actually. Your wrting has depth an holds a beauty all its own. Well done!

!~* Noelle *~!

I like this and your other work..Keep up the good job ^__^

At last...

I have read ALL of your fictionpress (.com) and filespace (.org) entries. It's a shame that "the Game Cycle" and "the VampireNicoletta" will never be complete, but that isn't important right now...

You seem to be quite knowledgable in the fields of classical literature, classical music, philosopy, and theology. You have taken these themes and beautifully woven them together on several occasions.

There's only two areas I myself have knowledge in: Satanic Death Metal and Information Technology.

Your writing is very grim and necro (and I am sure I have mentioned this on previous occasions). Darkness rules. \m/

It pains me that I'll never be as talented as you, but oh well...

May all of the gods, Zeus, Yahwe, Satan, Odin, Ra, and all the rest bless your dark soul.

I've read this story way back in Septermber 2003, but it appears I've never left a review. I've also read Hellion's Heart, Shounjo no Aijo, Hellion's Heart, Kasumi's Inn, and rest assured, I'll eventually read the rest of them.

Your style is so dark, perverted, sadistic, etc. It makes me happy that there is one half as demented as I am. If you don't mind, I've been kinda stalking your Internet actions. Ever since you changed your penname, I lost track, until I (by coincidence, mind you) found your penname at MegaTokyo... But all too late, as I read about your unfortunate demise. Don't know if it's true or not, but hell...

You're the best author ever, and easily the most perverted, sadistic, psychotic fiend, next to me.

If you're dead, then may Odin guide you to enlightenment (yes, I am a Norse Viking).

If you're alive, then best of luck in this world of corruption. Perhaps you'll reply to this by sending me an email so you can enlighten me with your masochistic ways, fellow bretheren of the night.

Your story is quite interesting. I am much into yuri fics. It seems like their is their is much to uncover. On A scale to 1-10, I give this story a 8.

Indeed the story did jump when you introduced Kotone. I liked this story up until the blood spree, then I felt the story went downhill. A little dissapointing, but I'll live...but hey, I'm not the best storyteller either. It would be cool if you one day revamped Yuki's Diary. Ah, well...I'm going to bed now.

I'm guessing one came from Sakura and the other...um...that chick Yuki blackmailed.

I'm guessing this entry was written by...Aya?

Okay, the new guy is turning psychotic. Also, damn, that fooled me as well. That was a big surprise about Kanako. I'm beginning to become adjusted to the new characters since they seem to bring about bits and pieces about Yuki and Kanako.