  kyoy 2004-04-12 . chapter 10 heya! i'm so sorry i took so long! *bows apologetically* i'm such a forgetter/forgetful person! so sorry! but i liked this chapter! heheh, the arguments between hou and viine were funny but i suggest you put more paragraph spacings. *smile* yeah! there's someone called 'dilim'! straight from our language! cool! i also liked the orange and violet shaded coloered sky and dim-lit star description! heheh, wala lang. i've always been a sucker for the differents shades and colors of the skies. *grin* heheh! anyways, ciaociao! sorry to waste your time! ja! *wide grin* |
| Bonecollector 2003-07-13 . chapter 9 We!
err...I really don't remember about the Quenn part before, but I guess I must have skipped it in your site. hehe ^^". or did you just add that? ^^" Anyways, I always liked the journal part, where they could write to each other, hehe...and an empty feeling on Asuka...hehe imagining the black swirling background while I was reading it..^^"...hope you'll publish the rest soon! |
| Bonecollector 2003-07-13 . chapter 1 GO KRiNX!
hehehe, there, finally i reviewed your story, happy?...hehe sounded like i was forced to review your story...hehe joke lang. congrats that you published your "tsubame-asuka" fic! i really appreciate that you used our anime code names...hehe. well good luck, and hope you'll publish a different one. =P |
| kyoy 2003-07-12 . chapter 9 finally! asuka's version of the story is revealed! mweheh! i thought ithe story was already finshed! guess not!hehe! |
| kyoy 2003-07-12 . chapter 6 does tsubame end up with hou? hehe, just curious lalalalalalalalala! |
| kyoy 2003-07-12 . chapter 5 one question: what does hou mean? |
| kyoy 2003-07-12 . chapter 4 hehe! now im shure i haven't read this chapter yet! the part where asuka writes back reminds me of HP book 2...sniff...which reminds me of HP book 5...snif...sirius! why did ya hafta die? sniff...sniff... how depressing...he was my most favorite character in the book...sniff... |
| kyoy 2003-07-12 . chapter 3 i thought i haven't read this yet when i read it until i it said: "welcome to terra" dunno, but that's the only phrase that rings a bell, maybe i DID read this chapter before, ah dunno! hehe! napaka ulyanin ko eh! mweheh! n_n |
| kyoy 2003-07-12 . chapter 2 hey! i also remember this part! ala lang! mweheh! your story's really nice! but each chapter is short! (not that it matters, hehe!) nweiz, ciaoey! |
| kyoy 2003-07-12 . chapter 1 hehe! i'm finally reading it! ganito pala ung itsura ng fictionpress.net! i like fanfic.net's features better (no offense!) i now remember this part! hehe! naf's in it! mweheh! |
  psychedelic aya 2003-07-05 . chapter 6YO! I have a different name in FP.net! Heheheh! Anyway, nice fic! Hope you can get the other chappies up soon!! :D Hehehehe! I wanna make an orig fic too. . . ah! You're so good! AND PSI IS CUTE! MWAHAHAH! AND SO IS ASTRAL! I'm so confused as to who to let Terra choose. . . Hehehe! Anyway, best of luck with your ficcie! TC! |
| Hakari 2003-07-04 . chapter 6 See? What did I tell you? I read the review you got. Told you you'll need to put spaces. Good Luck with the writing. Hope you write more in the future.
And PS: take precaution on your settings ok? |
 foxdance 2003-06-21 . chapter 1It seems like a nice story, but the format is extremely unreadable. Yu might want to adjust the spacing. Separating dialougues in paragraphs makes a less crammed, more reader-friendly story that your audience will definitely appreciate.
Write more, ja~
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