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vanzeeland 2007-08-23 ch 1,	I love the rhyme for this poem and it flows very nicely, I tried to come up with some contructive criticism but couldn't find anything.
Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-12 ch 1,	tragic and lyrical. it's disturbing but so powerfull and filled with beauty. i'd quote favorite parts from your work but everything is so perfect i'd end up quoting every single thing. hah i sound so kissass but really i mean it, you're amazing so yes i'll say it again and again, keep writing :D
vicious like the blue sky 2005-03-07 ch 1,	this reminds me of a sort of . . . a 60s folk song. beautiful.
grim-dreamer 2004-09-17 ch 1,	This is a sad poem... The fact that it is written in small case gives it an undertone. The pain and anguish expressed, particularly through the reptition of the key line "sylvia, won't you come home" brings a sense of forlorn timelessness. Very touching.
slumberdoll 2003-11-22 ch 1,	i shudder by the mere idea of this poem. very disturbing yet i praise you for your profound words and symbolisms. promising. ;) you might want to turn this into a song.
Distraut 2003-11-16 ch 1,	wow this is good...better then any of my attempts
GoodBye Everybody 2003-10-14 ch 1,	This was so depressing...especially since my name is Sylvia! ;_;
PhiloNysh 2003-08-19 ch 1,	This is a beautifully tragic story. You have captured the image of death well. This is extremely well written. Well Done. Strong emotions are evident in this poem.
DancinDramaFreak 2003-08-16 ch 1,	Whoa. That was so powerful. I could totally feel the emotions. :) I love poems like this; powerful, moving ones that tell a story and are semi repetative. This poem is incredible; you have so much talent. And you don't out-do yourself. Definately not. I actually had no idea what you meant, until I read your quote...that is a fantastic quote, by the way. Please write more, as you have fabulous talent. :) Cheers! Chelzea

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