|Reviews for Sakura|
| bipedalcooney 10/8/06 . chapter 1
Nice. Pretty and vivid, I like this a lot.
| greenGalilee 8/20/06 . chapter 1
| Tia LaPorte 7/16/06 . chapter 1
I love this. It was full of visual imagery. That last line cracks me up ("No, the sakura didn't drown..."). Beautifully done.
| likes to headbang 1/22/06 . chapter 1
nice imagery.. and that's so awesome.. cuz in the am. vers. of card captors she's called sakura, but in the krn. vers. they call her cherry, and now i know why! thank u and wonderful poem.
| Infection 12/21/05 . chapter 1
this was really good. full of vivd imagery.
| InspirASIAN 8/17/05 . chapter 1
| Living in a story called life 4/30/05 . chapter 1
cool i have a haiku on cherry blossoms but this one probably is better than mine anyways great job!
| the twinkling of an eye 4/17/05 . chapter 1
| softmusicnroses 3/17/05 . chapter 1
I like it!I am in choir and we are singing "Sakura"
**adds to favorites**
| Manuel Fajar 3/16/05 . chapter 1
Black cherry branch floats,
Rushing in Spring water's flood,
Destiny at sea,—
But each pink bud ferried out,
Was a seed that ne'er fulfilled.
| Bryosgirl 2/9/05 . chapter 1
Hmm... I definitely like this, but the format is a little off. It may have been better to write it in three haikus that tell one story. Other than that I liked it.
| Queen Flare 7/30/04 . chapter 1
It's a very nice combination of two different styles. Awesome.
| Ultimate Schuyler 7/17/04 . chapter 1
This was... nice, I guess, but I didn't truly understand it. Perhaps you could explain it to me? Please RR one of my haikus or senryuus.
| Shandris 5/4/04 . chapter 1
I'm parcial to Sakura myself...
*looks at screen name*
It's very beautiful!
Love how you utilized the tanka & haiku!
PS could you read my poem Sakura? It's not a haiku but I think you'll enjoy it. PLZ PLZ PLZ ! _
| swinger of birches 2/12/04 . chapter 1
This is so lovely, Zainab. I don't really have anything specific to say about it, just that it's lovely and conjures a really pretty image in my mind.