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| Becbet 2003-08-18 ch 1,  | The last stanza is the best. Reminds me of the cloud on my tongue poem. Hee...Cloud...as in 7...as in...it's really perverted if you think about it that way...as in...I'm shutting up and going to bed. -_- |
| swift sky silver 2003-06-18 ch 1,  | Very good comparisons. keep writing=0) |