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| Becbet 2003-08-18 ch 1,  | Hm...Maybe it's because I'm not really a fan of slam...But your WUIS poems, to me, aren't as good as your older ones. The material/subjects are all good. And I can't really place what I don't like about them...but there's something that irks me. Or mebbe it's just because I'm normally in bed at this time... |