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| Chibi Ohkami 2003-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I really like this! This is great! |
| Spector'sGirl 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseOOps, it was supposed to be *he* not her, I wonder how that r got in there... |
| Loganberry 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abuseOOh, I like this one a lot. It's very stark and coldly beautiful, really. Should be "...he's wishing *she* could be there," though, surely? "her" doesn't really work, even if it was put in deliberately. |