I have read the first chapter of the Auction and think you have talent. I have recently made conact with a publisher. I am having my first novel published.Ithink you have the talent to be published.If you want more information-Contact me at MilRb5@aol.com

once again, the story is just as fast flowing as any others u wrote... although sometimes the conversation seem to have a little repetition, maybe it's just the reason why it catches my attention... anyways, i'm looking forward to read more of them...good work...

Once again, excellent story, Princess. One thing I have to point out, though, is that the dialogue seems a bit wooden. A tip that was given to me a long time ago is to read what you write aloud and think if it sounds like something you'd say, and then think if it's something that people in that profession would say. Just a tip. Other than that, I enjoyed the story. Hope to read more of your stuff soon.

I really enjoy, Sheldon and Caleb series. I hope to read, more of them in the future. I look forward to looking up your website for Sheldon/Caleb soon.

hey - that was a great little story! go sheldon...that was some good female power! once again, i'm amazed at your awesome imagination and how you think of these plot lines...fabulous job as always!! and wow, your own sheldon/caleb site - that will be very cool :) keep up the awesome work!

--meg

Great story as usual! Can't wait to see when your website is completed!

Oh you're going to have a website, too cool! Have you ever thought about using pictures of actors or models to show visuals of Sheldon and Caleb? Because a story I also read, this girl uses hayden christensen to represent her lead character and its definitely fun picturing Hayden! Anyways,

"Caleb's been kidnapped."

"Again?" Garth replied dryly.
That line was so funny to me! Because its so true. Caleb is just good bait. lol. I'm glad they made up in the end and those two creepy sisters got theirs in the end too.

Those two chicks tracy and margo are so weird, the way they kept coming on to Caleb like that! You would think they wanted a threesome or whatever, well probably that and destroying Sheldon! lol. Poor sheldon, it seems in her line of work everyone is out to get her!
I love all the angstyness, couples that fight are fun to read about, that is until sheldon got the wrong idea, hopes she stops being so stubborn. Off to read chapter 2!

I totally loved this story. I'm a huge fan of Sheldon and Caleb. I love them both^^ and I can't wait for more Serpent's Kiss. Keep up the good work!^^