|Reviews for To Be Loved|
| The Wind Charmer 10/13/07 . chapter 18
This story reminds me of a book called Full House. BTW, I really enjoy your story.
| siddika 1/4/07 . chapter 28
LOVE YOUR STORY.
| youpin 1/3/07 . chapter 1
| justine dayea 12/13/06 . chapter 33
the plot is good, but there are parts that I skipped because they are kinda not appropriate during those scenes. The major problem that i had in this story is about the ages of the main characters. You make them sound they are acting like in their late 20's or early 30's, well in fact, they must be in their late 30's or early 40's. I hope you can clear that part. Another thing that bothers me is the word 'curious'. Most of the time you spell it 'curios', but i think you corrected in the latter part of the story.
as an overall, you hooked me up in the first chapters but in the latter chapters, you kinda lost your touch. But still you delivered the last chapters well.
| Writing4Eternity 9/5/06 . chapter 33
| tears 6/22/05 . chapter 1
you have a really good story so far but i thought you might want to kno its impossible for boy and girl twins to be identcal cuzz howcan they look the same..er certain parts arent there you kno tht kind of thing..lol just thought you might want to kno and if udont thts ok too
| Dawn 12/16/04 . chapter 12
Bit puzzled about the ages. If Frankie is nearly 18, shouldn't Sam be at least 18 to 20 years older than her?
| Dawn 12/16/04 . chapter 3
I am enjoying this, but you just need to get the tenses right.
| Dawn 12/16/04 . chapter 2
This is a great beginning.
However, a couple of points: fiancee (fiance is masculine)-sorry, unable to insert the acutes; and "ceases to amaze..." ('seizes' means to grab, or to take...).
| CynicInLove 9/25/04 . chapter 33
nice story. onet hing im confused about is that...why did niles have to act gay? it's not like he couldnt have done his job as a straight man right? im just wondering about that. anyways..a sequal. glad to hear about it! im gonna check if it's up yet
| CynicInLove 9/23/04 . chapter 9
ill finish this story later. good so far. only problem are the verb tenses. they're really bad. otherwise..it's good.
| ItalianQT 5/27/04 . chapter 33
That was such an excellent story! You could probaly get your story published! Great story! : )
| jill 3/26/04 . chapter 33
I really like it...great story! You are a very talented writer. Pls write more stories and keep me entertain. hehe
| jill 3/22/04 . chapter 33
One of the best stories in fictionpress. Easy to read, very entertaining. You're one of the best!
| anatidaephobiac 3/19/04 . chapter 33
Awesome story! It was so sweet! Keep writing!