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   SAngel 7/3/03 . chapter 4excellent chapter! it shows a lot about the characters! |
| NeWriter 7/1/03 . chapter 4 Nice chapter! You got a verb tense wrong here: "Alyxandra, you think everyone was a hottie," its supposed to be "is". Lol. Anyway, I like the way you make the characters! Niles sounds aproving enough D |
| SAngel 6/24/03 . chapter 3 lovely chapter! i can't wait to see what will happen! |
| NeWriter 6/23/03 . chapter 3 Yeah but you had one little one here: "My sister was going to flip when I tell her." it should be: My sister IS going to flip when I tell her. Dlol. I really like this chapter! The thoughts and actions are great! You describes it very well here... well doneP |
| NeWriter 6/23/03 . chapter 2 Really nice feelings and sensations here in this chapter! well done) I like it! |
| Haute Couture 6/20/03 . chapter 2 lovely story, keep updates comming! |
| BellezAzul 6/18/03 . chapter 1 This is a good story... Update faster, ok? It's very well written Good job :o) |
| SAngel 6/18/03 . chapter 1 good start! i can't wait to see what will happen! |
| NeWriter 6/18/03 . chapter 1 I like this idea. It looks great. You got some spelling mistakes and this: At the age of fifteen, she already towers her mom's 5'9" height. Sometimes they mistook them for sisters instead of mother and daughter. then you said that she was 10! S rather confusing. Anyway, its good that you got some family background here. Good job! |
