|Reviews for To Be Loved|
| SAngel 7/3/03 . chapter 4
excellent chapter! it shows a lot about the characters!
| NeWriter 7/1/03 . chapter 4
Nice chapter! You got a verb tense wrong here: "Alyxandra, you think everyone was a hottie," its supposed to be "is". Lol. Anyway, I like the way you make the characters! Niles sounds aproving enough D
| SAngel 6/24/03 . chapter 3
lovely chapter! i can't wait to see what will happen!
| NeWriter 6/23/03 . chapter 3
Yeah but you had one little one here: "My sister was going to flip when I tell her."
it should be: My sister IS going to flip when I tell her.
Dlol. I really like this chapter! The thoughts and actions are great! You describes it very well here... well doneP
| NeWriter 6/23/03 . chapter 2
Really nice feelings and sensations here in this chapter! well done) I like it!
| Haute Couture 6/20/03 . chapter 2
lovely story, keep updates comming!
| BellezAzul 6/18/03 . chapter 1
This is a good story... Update faster, ok? It's very well written Good job :o)
| SAngel 6/18/03 . chapter 1
good start! i can't wait to see what will happen!
| NeWriter 6/18/03 . chapter 1
I like this idea. It looks great. You got some spelling mistakes and this: At the age of fifteen, she already towers her mom's 5'9" height. Sometimes they mistook them for sisters instead of mother and daughter.
then you said that she was 10! S rather confusing. Anyway, its good that you got some family background here. Good job!