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| Dixie 2007-07-15 ch 17,  | Holy Icing that was a very good Time-travle peice really loved it and hope you write another one. I really enjoyed the end. I liked the amount of kids and her mother finally belived her |
| youpin 2007-02-08 ch 17,  | Amazing job. |
| highly-kissable 2006-07-07 ch 16, | aww i loved the ending so sweet though it was a but rushed but still great |
| KN 2005-10-17 ch 1, | Interesting piece, I can't seem to put it down! |
| Indubidably 2005-05-26 ch 17, | AW W W W Ww w w w ww w w!! WOW! |
| zagato 2005-04-22 ch 17, | you have a good story. please write more. |
| chryseis 2004-09-07 ch 17, | loved your plot- it was really sweet and original. but if the story was not so rushed, perhaps it would be a little better. |
| Autumn Pierce 2004-07-23 ch 7, | Sorry it took so long to answer your question, but yes, she came back before she had gotten the measles. |
| nathalsa 2004-07-15 ch 17, | This story was amazing. I could sense your love and devotion to the characters and the stories in every single word. I am truly impressed. |
| ItalianQT 2004-01-31 ch 17, | Wow that was really an awesome story...I'm glad she got to go back to her family.. great plot! : ) |
| K-razy Grrl 2004-01-24 ch 1, | I realized I'd forgotten to ask you something when I'd finished the story, so I thought I'd submit another review (even if the question is ahead of the chapter). If Raleigh died of measles, how could she have come back? Did everyone just accept that she'd come back to life or something? Or did she come back before she died? Anyway, it was an awesome story. It was really touching. It's the first story I've read about going back in time that didn't spend half the time complaining about how there were no modern appliances or technologies. I love the fact that she got to see her family one last time though her primary/natal family I mean. I loved the ending too. Very nice. :-D |
| K-razy Grrl 2004-01-24 ch 17, | I loved it! It's a great story. Keep writing! |
| Magic Jellybean 2003-08-04 ch 17, | Oh my gosh! The BEST story. When she first went back in time I wanted her to go home but then when she came back I felt like CRYING because she WASN'T back in time! Thats a real twist. |
| Misty Woods 2003-08-04 ch 17, | This story is absolutely BEAUTIFUL! I was really, really touched. I was quite upset when Raleigh died of measles, but everything was alright later on! :) GREAT! It would be so sad if she had really died. :( I love this story! Great job! P.S. Raleigh is a very creative and unusual name! :) |
| aims80 2003-07-19 ch 17, | Very interesting story. I really enjoyed reading it. Luv Aims :) |