this is such a wonderful story. i hope you haven't given up on it, it would be a shame to see it stop here. i really want to see how it ends, and i hope you are still writing it, even if you're not posting. wonderful writing!

I love this... *goes singing around the room for a bit* It's cute and interesting and fun and just the right thing needed to keep me in bad half a day when I should be out and about doing...things... :-))

Ahw!! This is so cute and I like the new approach on the whole angels and mortals theme. There are plenty'o people who like shounen so forget those who don't they're just stuck up 's all. I like the way you started up too, just in the middle of everything the story starts, that can be difficult, but you're doing it in a wonderful way. Keep it up boo!!