this was a really interesting approach. i knew right when the boy came into play that he was Death--that was really neat how you put it that way.
yeah, it is depressing, but that's life for some people, and you kept the girl's feelings realistic without being overly melodramatic...like some people who write depressing things are. good job!
well that's all. happy writing!

~Samantha Marie

Hey that was cool le-chan

That was sad. You sure you don't wanna write any more depressing stuff? 'Cause you're good at it. ::groans:: PPl think i'm good at it too-- i can't write nething *but* depressing stuff... oh sure, i try, but i don't *feel* it like i do this type of stuff. ::sighs:: okay, not gonna vent any more frustration onto a completely unrelated review.

Nice theory on death. Poor girl.

Wow. Sad, but well written. Good job! I'm putting it on my favorites. Awesome.