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| Dying Without Gackt 2005-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseOmg! How sweet was that! Aw - Man...I wish someone like that really existed! Thanks for all your reviews! |
| Artemis Obscure 2004-05-24 ch 1, | abuseit's not only uplifting, it's inspiring. it makes me realize that no matter how much wrong i do, there's still a way to go back to God |
| slumberdoll 2003-12-21 ch 1, | abuseawesome! xD |
| content with rhyme 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love it. And so true! :o) |
| Zainab 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abuseA very good rhythm |
| greenfroggies 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abusetouching and well written, even if it is not what i believe. the reason i am not religious is that i do not believe that spirite, god(s), souls and 'great truths' exist: but i do believe in (most of) the morals of religions such as christianity. If loving god makes you happy, then all the better for you. |
| cosmo-queen 2003-07-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful piece. I know I haven't always pleased God so I'm very thankful that He still loves me, despite the bad things I may do. Great work, great message. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Lidless Eye 2003-07-06 ch 1, | abuseExcellent piece. I'm not too deep into religion and all, but this is definitely inspirational. Awesome job. |
| soulspring 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abusesuch an uplifting, truthful poem with a message that we should all recognize and remember. |
| swift sky silver 2003-06-25 ch 1, | abusevery effective. the rhyming made it even more effective. i liked the second verse the best. it's so true=0) |
| Angelic Wings 2003-06-25 ch 1, | abuseSo touching... |
| The Black Rider 2003-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. It created such a specific image in my head. It really made me think about things... |
| PainKiller 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseAmazing work. That very first stanza is true to so, so many Christians who go astray. I loved this, and what a great message. Keep up the fabulous work. |
| CoolBeans18s 2003-06-22 ch 1, | abuseWOW! This is so beautiful and true... Wonderful, amazing, brilliant, so full of warmth and light and hope... (rushes off to look up some more words)I love it! ~ CoolBeans18s |
| Mime 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abuseYeah, no matter what wrong actions we perform, we can always find God (or any other diety, as I'm non-religious) waiting to forgive us and grant us another chance. Beautiful work! |