 glitterjewele 2003-06-30 . chapter 1*slaps hand over heart* GORGEOUS. lol i love your english class poems, you should group them into a collection and add to them frequently ;P. so yes, this flowed beautifully, as always, and i really loved it more and more as it went on. besides the oh-so-touching ending, this bit really snagged me:
a wave stretched/on the beach, grasping/for an answer/in its never ending reach.
i think i actually inclined my head toward the screen ~ i mean, i sorta felt like i WAS the wave . . . t'was awesome. great piece! |