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imkandiluvme 2003-07-15 . chapter 1
if it weren't for the fact that this review is a form of speach all your poems leave me speachless
glitterjewele 2003-06-30 . chapter 1
*slaps hand over heart* GORGEOUS. lol i love your english class poems, you should group them into a collection and add to them frequently ;P. so yes, this flowed beautifully, as always, and i really loved it more and more as it went on. besides the oh-so-touching ending, this bit really snagged me:

a wave stretched/on the beach, grasping/for an answer/in its never ending reach.

i think i actually inclined my head toward the screen ~ i mean, i sorta felt like i WAS the wave . . . t'was awesome. great piece!
Caustic Git, The 2003-06-30 . chapter 1
beautiful... really beautiful...
Stoffpferd 2003-06-20 . chapter 1
Beautiful...your such an amazing writer!

~Stoffpferd~
smileyamers 2003-06-19 . chapter 1
^__^ this is a lovely poem - full of love and beauty.

i am also happy to say im a texan too (not willingly ^^)! ahahaha.

another thing (though this might sound weird). I really like your titles for your poems. they...are intriguing i suppose. and your subjects are all extremely original and beautiful too. =)Keep up the good work!
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