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Tralala 2008-04-04 ch 21,	Wo-w. That was brilliant I say! It was really realistic how things all happened and turned out. I loved Ryan, and Nathan was pretty awesome too. Actually all the characters were great. Even Caleb's Mother, the phone call was really real and amazing. Only one thing that was hard was not having Speech quotations. It confused me a little, but I eventually figured it out. Anyways... AMAZING. LOVED IT. YOU ARE THE BEST. Now I'm off to real more of your stories. x
Artemis1000 2007-11-16 ch 21,	A beautiful and amazing story! I love all the characters and the plot was wonderfully woven. I felt with them all, even when they're at odds. You did a great job at showing the conflict between Caleb/Ryan on one side and Nathan on the other without making the reader dislike Nathan or the boys. I also loved the conflict between Caleb and Ryan. And Kayla, she's so cute. I'd been hoping for Kayla and Nathan to fall in love, but it didn't work out for them :( They make great friends, though.
NFMadProps04 2007-10-01 ch 21,	Two words- ** FANTASTIC. By far one of the best fics on here. It's amazing. Amazing. I loved Caleb and Ryan and Nathan and Kayla. It was subtle and not-preachy or fluffy. Yay!
NFMadProps04 2007-09-30 ch 1,	Only through the first chapter, but your English is surprisingly good for it being a second language - hardly anything really stood out as being wrong. And it's good. Let's read on...
tia_blue 2007-08-03 ch 3,	This is super sweet and actually very original. I totally couldnt tell english isnt your first language (plus you get major points for mentioning Canada!) Anywho, I really liket his story. On to the next chapter! ps sorry for my own spelling. Im in france and therefor dont have spell check. And I cant find the damn apostraphes on this french keyboard!
i-see-faeries 2007-07-08 ch 21,	LOL. Amusing, very amusing. And Ryan and Caleb are adorable. It's very dramatic and kind of superficially ploted, but it's real. I like to think it shows how people really think about gays. And how hard it is for some parents to accept it, even though they love their child. I love this. Great job. ^^
Valentine's Disease 2007-02-02 ch 20,	This is such a gorgeous, well written, interesting story. Good job!
Lady Psychic 2006-09-20 ch 21,	Wow! This is a very good story. It was well written and the characters were well developed. The story really hooked me in and I kept reading until I finished.
ashmael 2006-06-11 ch 21,	Such a sweet story. ^_^ I loved it. The characters were amazing and well-developed. It was such a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing it.
ashmael 2006-06-11 ch 3,	Your portrayal of the roads, motel, and trucker are just fine [if not a bit stereotypical]. And if I may, have you ever considered getting a beta reader? They could help out with the small, nit-picky, grammar issues. Hope I'm not being annoying with these reviews XD
ashmael 2006-06-11 ch 2,	Another good chapter, but I wish more would have happened in it. Regardless, it's interesting and has great characters.
ashmael 2006-06-11 ch 1,	First of all, I have to tell you I was /shocked/ when I read your note at the bottom. I never would have guessed you weren't a native English speaker. I'm studying foreign languages, and I know what it takes to write that well. I'm way impressed.Besides that, the start was a little confusing in that I wasn't sure which character was which. There were a lot of names, and not a lot of explanation as to who they were.On to the next chapter!
Mydaya 2006-04-23 ch 21,	Hi ^^ I'm french so sorry for my bad english, but I want to congratulate you ! I love this story ^w^ It's so... interessant and deep (I don't know if you understand, lol) but it wa a pleasure to read your work ^^ It's so realistic ! So... godd job ^w^ Mydaya
Inherent 2006-02-06 ch 21,	This story was wonderful! I really loved the ending and well, how it all came together. Very enjoyable to read.
Logical and serene megadeat... 2006-01-22 ch 21,	Sorry I've been lazy on reading. I'm glad everything worked out and it wasn't corny.

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