| Reviews for Sky Diving DareDevil |
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joie 610 7/6/03 . chapter 1woo! good job :) wow, that haiku gives me the chills... i'm afraid of heights. you're welcome! you are one of my favorite authors- i love your work. |
CancerianQueen 6/25/03 . chapter 1Yeah! I reckon. True! Vnomi |
Keep it 100 6/19/03 . chapter 1Sounds like quite the rush. Heart of the Sword |
Mime 6/19/03 . chapter 1I've alwaays wanted to learn how to sky dive or haqng glide. Your haiku describes the feeling well. |
BCRGAL 6/19/03 . chapter 1This is good, but I think you should add more to it. Don't get me wrong, the verse is really clear and powerful. You should make it into something more. A poem with that verse alone in it will turn heads. Nice job. |
kamikaze899 6/19/03 . chapter 1hehe... cute! i liked it. now i know how it feels like.. _ |