This song is very good, amazing even, I sense even more bibical imagery well done it has a very strong impac. The structure of the song is well made, and they rhymes are very well purposed so keep up the excelent work, and thanks for reviewing my songs as well :)
I rate this song: 8.8/10

oh my god, your poetry is amazing. i wish i could say more than that.

you've done it again.

Lying alien! Beautiful! i swear on my cat and spider and the little walking stone that's ment to be a hamster that your stuff is amazing and i only ever say that if i mean it...

very well written, amigo. interesting. you have such a grand way with words, u can twist them to do what you want...i dont know how u do it...but u do!

um...gon't get it...soudns ncie..