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| Mark 2003-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow when i read this i see your father. I see hie inside his mind. I see inside your mind. And your getting everything here that he does. This shoves the point home of a helpless situation of stupid parent control of a grown adult feeling they know everything only becuz they are adult. Sigh** fukin parents |
| Nevermore Forevermore 2003-06-19 ch 1,  | abuseI like this. My parents were kind of like this for a time, too, until I started sneaking out at night, and the realized that they couldnn't control my life forever. Anyway, I've gotten completely off topic. Nicely done. You captured the feeling perfectly. |
| Pardalis 2003-06-19 ch 1, | abuseAck, I can almost relate to some parts of that... I hate when people try to make you perfect. Nice poem. |