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| Anjeni Windsinger 2003-07-28 ch 1,   | I think I'm gonna end up reviewing every one here.. Anyways, great poem, one of my favs so far. Great work :D Keep writing! |
| NeoFight 2003-07-16 ch 1, | Another really beautiful one. There's so much emotion put into your words; very well done. This makes your third on my favorite story list, so... You're now a favorite author. ^_^ |
| Ravynne 2003-06-20 ch 1, | Thats impressive. The last line is sort of haunting, which is kinda freaky. But anyways the only suggestion I would make is to separate the different thoughts into a few shorter stanzas instead of one long poem. I think that might make it easier to read. Anyways nice work. |
| nimue webweaver 2003-06-19 ch 1, | OMG! IM SPEACHLESS |