oh, spiffy indeed! heya, it's alli...yes, she said she'd read stuff. and she is. ^^ she may be evil, but she doesn't lie...not to her friends anyway. this sounds intriguing. and the imagery is great! no wonder you had fun w/ this...good job! and write some more, for Ra's sake...try poetry. i used to think i was awful at it, and now it's all i ever write, though it all sucks. but that isn't the point. you had one...? shaddup! i told you to stop doing that. anyway, you could find you have talent. really?! i mean ashley! ooh...you suck at life. i know. XD O_o i'll be quiet now and leave you alone...good job! ja'ne...

pretty interesting so far! I would like to know more though. Update soon. :)