Hey, this is really quite good. It's got a well-thought out plot and a somewhat epic feel. Not sure how I can describe it but I really liked it!

You're probably not going to read this because it's done, but anyway, I love the introduction, a little sckechey, but what the hell.

I am impressed with the length of your story and how you were able to keep up with all the characters, but (and I am not trying to be mean) it just wasn't realistic. Things happened too quickly and the group won battles far too easily. Tindel was so helpful, as if he wasn't scared at all of his government; people (or should I say aliens?) like this are almost non-existant, unless they have others to rely upon. And Earth (the humans' earth) was rebuilt in too short an amount of time. To be able to get power plants, working electrical systems, and computers would take years, notwithstanding the internet! To rebuild Earth enough that there was a centralized government and all would take decades. Sorry, I may be going into too much detail...
The story was a good one, but it was just too easy for the "good guys" to win. I really liked the idea, but you may just want to work on it more (or not, if you aren't thinking of becoming a professional).
Oh, by the way...thanks for reading my story, "Darkas Night"! Do you have any good constructive criticism for me? (I am going to try and get my story published when finished and edited). ^_^

Not gonna say much 'cause I just reviewed yesterday, but this is getting really good. I like it.

Aw...Gwen said a bad word! I'm telling! (not...duh)
Loving this so far...And just out of curiousity, how many chapters is it gonna have? I've only read to First Journal Entry Simon so far, so I won't be getting to the end for a while, but I'm wondering.
rnrn-Keep writing!
-bookworm701

I like.
OK, in summnation (sp): I like it-- the only points it could have used work on were in the length of the chappies. A few (journal entries) could have been merged with others. But that's sorta minor, good one anyways...
Oh, BTW, I'm not going to be near a computer for another week.

Loving this so far! I've only read up to chapter three but it's really good. I should have known Zagwitar would be a traitor...But I didn't. Shame on me. And I liked Gwen's line in chapter 3: "Can we put our world on speed dial?"
Thanks for all your reviews. I'll read First Journal Entry Jared tomorrow.
-bookwrom701

what a nice ending! i loved how you got the mutants back in the story :) i highly approve of your story!! (the final journal entries were a nice touch too) i'm so sorry it took me so long to review but here i am!! :)

aw yayayayayayayayay! happy endings rule! now it's time to read the journal entries and the epilogue! i approve greatly! :)

ah! you've finished!! you're a fast writer! hm interesting... i'm thinkin' jason's trouble!

that ending reminded me of Orson Scott Card's (the best author ever!) The Worthing Saga. Only because one of the characters in it founded a world and then, so to speak, 'froze' himself, and when, centuries later, his people found out about him, they 'unfroze' him... Oh well! I LOVE YOUR STORY! Better than anything i could write.

And thank you for reviewing! I am so happy!

awesome! the journal was found! Hehehe! anyway, nice follow-up.

Prisoners again...need action.

THis is for all the past chapters...

Need action.

YAY! Humans are free again! Yay! nice ending! ^.^