Hm. Interesting. A suprising turn of events. I like how you ended with Todd's diary. That was very creative!

~ CoolBeans18s

Another nice chapter. I was glad of the first paragraph. It really explained a lot. Good work!

~ CoolBeans18s

Neat! I like it when the main character is evil. Is there any particular reason she wants to rule the world (besides the obvious, I mean)? Anyway, great stuff!

~ CoolBeans18s

Refreshingly clever. I love it when the evil character is the main character. Lovely!

~Mari