wow. now that creates a kik $$ vision! hehe. well done. i like your writing a lot. now if only i was good at haikus.. -sigh- *TI*

Now that's a great way of looking at rivers! Why haven't I thought of that? (Probably because I'm too busy scaring the bejeesus out of people...)

Question:

Is it supposed to be 'meandering necklaces OR pearl', as you've got it, or did you mean 'meandering necklaces OF pearl'?

The only problem is that this is not a haiku. Unless they've redefined haiku poetry since I was in school, haiku has a very strict format of 17 syllables, constructed in lines of 5-7-5.

It's a grand poem-beautiful imagery, which from what I have read, is your strongest point, but it is not a haiku.

I'm speechless...u never told me!

Hm... Usually Haiku are supposed to have the syllable pattern 5-7-5, but I guess there are enough people who have already told you, so just ignore this... Anyway, this is a wonderful description. NEVER STOP WRITING!

this was awesome.0)

Wonderful job! Especially for a first haiku! Excellent work!

PS. Thank you for the reviews. They were very much appreciated!

Wow! I've never seen it described that way before. Great work.

Heart of the Sword