|Reviews for Necklaces|
| TiEka Koniku 1/28/04 . chapter 1
wow. now that creates a kik $$ vision! hehe. well done. i like your writing a lot. now if only i was good at haikus.. -sigh- *TI*
| Anagronax 8/9/03 . chapter 1
Now that's a great way of looking at rivers! Why haven't I thought of that? (Probably because I'm too busy scaring the bejeesus out of people...)
| This Account Is Closed 7/19/03 . chapter 1
Is it supposed to be 'meandering necklaces OR pearl', as you've got it, or did you mean 'meandering necklaces OF pearl'?
The only problem is that this is not a haiku. Unless they've redefined haiku poetry since I was in school, haiku has a very strict format of 17 syllables, constructed in lines of 5-7-5.
It's a grand poem-beautiful imagery, which from what I have read, is your strongest point, but it is not a haiku.
| PurpleLilac 7/5/03 . chapter 1
I'm speechless...u never told me!
| Ellerfru 6/24/03 . chapter 1
Hm... Usually Haiku are supposed to have the syllable pattern 5-7-5, but I guess there are enough people who have already told you, so just ignore this... Anyway, this is a wonderful description. NEVER STOP WRITING!
| swift sky silver 6/23/03 . chapter 1
this was awesome.0)
| Wasted Postage 6/22/03 . chapter 1
Wonderful job! Especially for a first haiku! Excellent work!
PS. Thank you for the reviews. They were very much appreciated!
| Keep it 100 6/20/03 . chapter 1
Wow! I've never seen it described that way before. Great work.
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