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TiEka Koniku 1/28/04 . chapter 1wow. now that creates a kik $$ vision! hehe. well done. i like your writing a lot. now if only i was good at haikus.. -sigh- *TI* |
Anagronax 8/9/03 . chapter 1Now that's a great way of looking at rivers! Why haven't I thought of that? (Probably because I'm too busy scaring the bejeesus out of people...) |
This Account Is Closed 7/19/03 . chapter 1Question: Is it supposed to be 'meandering necklaces OR pearl', as you've got it, or did you mean 'meandering necklaces OF pearl'? The only problem is that this is not a haiku. Unless they've redefined haiku poetry since I was in school, haiku has a very strict format of 17 syllables, constructed in lines of 5-7-5. It's a grand poem-beautiful imagery, which from what I have read, is your strongest point, but it is not a haiku. |
PurpleLilac 7/5/03 . chapter 1I'm speechless...u never told me! |
Ellerfru 6/24/03 . chapter 1Hm... Usually Haiku are supposed to have the syllable pattern 5-7-5, but I guess there are enough people who have already told you, so just ignore this... Anyway, this is a wonderful description. NEVER STOP WRITING! |
swift sky silver 6/23/03 . chapter 1this was awesome.0) |
Wasted Postage 6/22/03 . chapter 1Wonderful job! Especially for a first haiku! Excellent work! PS. Thank you for the reviews. They were very much appreciated! |
Keep it 100 6/20/03 . chapter 1Wow! I've never seen it described that way before. Great work. Heart of the Sword |