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| Ivriniel 2004-09-11 ch 1,  | abuseVery nive images. |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2004-03-17 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful... but is this a haiku... nevermind... the imagery was great... |
| TiEka Koniku 2004-01-28 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. i like it though. coolness. *TI* |
| Ian Shweltser 2004-01-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good I really liked that one it jsut gave me a vision. Great great job. |
| Laksha 2003-12-19 ch 1, | abuseonce again, great use of adjectives. beautifully written. keep it up. -ryanne moonit |
| Emi Amara 2003-10-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat! hi!! thank you for the review! =) great describing words too, well done! cya !! |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abusemeh, me no lady but a lunatic girl with an evil laugh ^.~ MWWHAAHAHA~~ |
| mzNEEDA 2003-08-06 ch 1, | abusethis is wonderful . i could even imagine it ! great imagery !! `hehe . R&R some of my work . i strongly suggest recent poems from my work and "Love is Bliss" and "Love is Bliss Part II" . kk`s bye ! |
| PurpleLilac 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseNice touch... |
| Wasted Postage 2003-06-22 ch 1, | abuseWonderful work! Simply wonderful! You are better at haikus then you let yourself believe. |
| The Broken Princess 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abuseoh...now I really like this one. Beautifully written! *~Immortal Spirit~* |
| Keep it 100 2003-06-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. ~Heart of the Sword |