I like this very much. (Has randomly been looking at fictionpress accounts, don't ask.)
So much worse to know that you might never find them,
That they are real, and nothing but a soft, deadly hope to you.
Yes.
To fall in love with someone's shadow
Is a curse enough to crush the soul.
Oh lord. ::hugs:: I know what you mean.
If I cast my heart out on the waters,
Would you catch it?
Take the barb and bait, in all their terrible glory?
I like that imagery. It (to be very delve-y) reaches into the sterotype of a perfect relationship and exposes it for what that truly is—accepting one another's faults, not a lack of faults.
I love you dear.

Good work as always! :D

WHERE IS JEWEL SAILOR SENSHI?? HM?? MUST WRITE MORE!
*nods firmly* Our writer's block'll end soon I'm sure. Maybe we can collaborate again. That'd be nifty.
--Riana Rogue

wow. BRILLIANT! ::gasps:: you so need to write more. love the penname. so unique. ^^ like your poetry...you have a lot of the same interests as me...::sigh:: love the rain beyond any logical reasoning...this is amazing. there are some truly genius lines in this. like the first one. and the knives of silk, swords of rose...wow. wow. can't say much else... apparently you like roses...i love them...and the dust of broken dreams...you're incredible! keep it up!

Quite evocative, cherie. Very good imagery.

Oh, my darling, that was utterly marvelous. You have such a superb skill at poesy.