Reviews for Mystery Of The Night

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Alenor 2008-07-06 ch 16,	abuseheya, good story, cya later.
xX-Bella-Xx 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseWow! This story is so good! Great writing - I love it! Amazing!1 Could you do me a small favour? I would be really grateful if you could review my vampire story (don't worry - not the average, cheesy, vampire-falls-in-love-with-human-girl story!!). The latest chapters are the best ones. It would really help if you could! Once again, great story! ♥ Bella ♥ x
Stella Celestial 2008-02-12 ch 16,	abuseI love it and also the ending when he went away in the sun reminded me of my favorite book the silver kiss. but not exactly what it was but I still love this probably even more than the book. thank you for writing it.
Kura-sama 2008-02-08 ch 16,	abuseNo Roland!! T_T I wish he didn't kill himself, but I can understand that after living all thosec centuries driven by revenge, there is nothing left to live for once it's achieved, especially since the world seemed so bleak. Still, I wish he'd instead lived for Gia ... wasn't love enough motivation to go on? T__T So sad. The ending is nice, I like her new name. Good story, though character development could have been more thorough.
RoseLife 2007-08-25 ch 16,	abuseOMG! I CAN'T BElIEVE IT'S FINISHED! I LOVED IT!! LOL! OOPS! hehe was still on caps lock XD But i seriously, loved it! the plot and the ending couldnt have been better =P so great job! And keep up the fab work! ~RL~
RoseLife 2007-08-25 ch 10,	abuseYAY! i think im ur 100th review!! hehe o what a twist! can't wait to read on! great job!! XD ~RL~
RoseLife 2007-08-25 ch 7,	abuseAW!! I can't decide whether i want Gia and Roland to end up together, or Gia and Gabriel! lol but great job! lovin it! ~RL~
RoseLife 2007-08-25 ch 5,	abuseNO! HE HAS TO KILL HER?! i thought he liked her! ahh! lol hehe great work! can't wait to read more! XD ~RL~
RoseLife 2007-08-25 ch 2,	abuseHehe! just started reading it! lol! prob wont review EVERY chappie! but i'll do a few! XD loving it so far! =P great job! ~RL~
Moonxpi 2007-01-04 ch 16,	abuseExcellent. That was very well written and I'm glad you wrote it in the first place. I like how Gabriel and Roland were able to have a somewhat mutual friendship. Thanks for writing it. Until then.
bob 2006-07-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseDisclaimer: This is my idea and I haven't gotten it from someone else. Any resemblance of any of the character or the story is purely by accident, yady yady yah. one thing...i thought a disclaimer was used for saying you don't own starburst candies or harry potter- dis-claiming, stating that you DONT own something. dis-claim..?
soccer-grl101 2006-05-20 ch 16,	abusehey this was a great story. I think you should definitely write a sequal where Gia and Roland meet in their next life. I think it would be a really good story.
RuthieTudor 2006-03-04 ch 16,	abuseWell written. I liked the incorporated Spanish. Probably could have embellished more but hey, I'm not trying to be a hypocrite. Nice job.. sad ending.. really sweet.
paper.eskimo.boots 2006-03-01 ch 16, anon.	abuseI liked it. Until the end. The end seemed completely rushed. Some things just didn't make sense. Like the whole ring glowing thing and the fact that she seemed to have moved on completely and started a whole new life...2 weeks later. It seems like it would take so much longer. And the fight, I think you could've stretched it out longer. Maybe not have entirely finished the fight and ended this chapter with a cliffhanger (we all know how much we love those.). But that's just my opinion. You reall are a good writer. :3
Nerdette 2006-01-28 ch 16,	abuseThis was so good. Loved it!

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