This sent quite a bit of shivers down my spine.
The way you describe things is awesome: it just goes on and on and you just don't want to stop reading. I liked the repetition of the "she ran", it gave the story an almost poetic cadence.

Welcome to hell. Gives me the shivers. I like it. I've got a story on the site called Obsidian. Please read and review.

very lovely. and intriguing and i cant spell and er... nice. not my favorite, but...

One word sweetcake, paragraphs.